Sunday, May 24, 2009

"hey you"

"Hey you, my center of attraction I loved you all of my life."

I told you this day in and day out as I saw,
Time was leaving it’s footsteps at your door steps.

As time march’s forward conquering the castle of soul,
I am trying to make sense what they are telling me now about you.

6 comments:

Daanish said...

surely our 'castle of soul' which is our body slowly being conquered by the marchig band of Time,as I see greying hair,pearly eyes and...mind with memory loss.

The real question is :how to age graciously?

Americanising Desi said...

i m still searchin for answers!

Tantra Flower said...

Daanish, that answer is different for everybody. I think acceptance is very important. Find a new definition of you. Beautiful poem, Daanish. Thank you. Namaste

Nameless Fameless said...

Well .. i somehow feel that's a talk about experience ?

Daanish said...

Nameless Fameless,its ok to feel this....each of us may have a different experience with the same story !

I appreciate your comment :)

tantra flower, I agree acceptance is the key !

AD,you are not alone,we all are reserachers :)

Ash said...

Search is on yet :S