Saturday, February 7, 2009

"a valentine on moon"

I do remember our first Valentine:
I said,"yes".
You said, "yes".
The first time our lips said," hello"
The first time our hands felt,"abstract"
The first time our bodies said, "hi"
The first time our minds said,"don't stop"
That was our first Valentine:
I said, "yes".
You said, "yes".
We were flying high in the garden of thousand desires.
We were diving deep in the bliss of one desire.
That was our first Valentine:
I said, "yes".
You said,"yes".

That was our first Valentine:
We named, "A Valentine on Moon" !!

11 comments:

seher's shenanigans said...

very very romantic... bu i want it to be on venus!

Ghazala Khan said...

Interview Request:

Hello Dear and Respected,
I hope you are fine and carrying on the great work you have been doing for the Pakistani side of Internet. I am Ghazala Khan from The Pakistani Spectator (TPS), We at TPS throw a candid look on everything happening in and for Pakistan. We are trying to contribute our humble share in the blogistan.

We at TPS are carrying out a new series of interviews with the notable Pakistani bloggers, writers and web masters. In that regard, We would like to interview you, if you please take some time out of your busy schedule. Please send me your approval for your interview at ghazala.khi at gmail.com, so that I could send you the questions. We would be extremely grateful. We have done many interviews with many bloggers from Pakistan like Dr. Awab, Kashif Aziz, Fahd Mirza, Unaiza Nasim, Omer Alvi and host of others. We have also interviewed prominent figures like renowned writer Dr. Ayesha Siddiqa Agha, Dawn Columnist Urdsher Cowasjee and plethora of others.

regards.

Ghazala Khan
The Pakistani Spectator
http://www.pakspectator.com

tantra flower said...

"We were flying high in the garden of thousand desires.
We were diving deep in the bliss of one desire."

This was my favorite part. What a lovely poem Daanish, as always. Namaste

hfm said...

I can't wait til Valentine now, what with all the shopping i've done!
:D

I hope yours is amazing.

siras said...

WOW! Makes me wish a thousand wishes! =)

Komal said...

Lovely! =)

Ashley said...

Very Sweet =)

exquisite said...

kewl
and beautiful

Daanish said...

seher,surely venus is a goddess appropriate venue !

hfm,why shopping,its not xmas!

thanks:komal,siras,ashley,exguisitetantra flower :)

Abdul Sami said...

beautiful beautiful poem

and once again every body gets interviewed but me... :( !!!

lol

Daanish said...

I protest and decline my interview,until Abdul Sami gets his interview........OK :)