Saturday, February 7, 2009

"a valentine on moon"

I do remember our first Valentine:
I said,"yes".
You said, "yes".
The first time our lips said," hello"
The first time our hands felt,"abstract"
The first time our bodies said, "hi"
The first time our minds said,"don't stop"
That was our first Valentine:
I said, "yes".
You said, "yes".
We were flying high in the garden of thousand desires.
We were diving deep in the bliss of one desire.
That was our first Valentine:
I said, "yes".
You said,"yes".

That was our first Valentine:
We named, "A Valentine on Moon" !!

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

very very romantic... bu i want it to be on venus!

Tantra Flower said...

"We were flying high in the garden of thousand desires.
We were diving deep in the bliss of one desire."

This was my favorite part. What a lovely poem Daanish, as always. Namaste

Anonymous said...

I can't wait til Valentine now, what with all the shopping i've done!
:D

I hope yours is amazing.

siras said...

WOW! Makes me wish a thousand wishes! =)

gone! said...

Lovely! =)

SAM said...

Very Sweet =)

Anonymous said...

kewl
and beautiful

Daanish said...

seher,surely venus is a goddess appropriate venue !

hfm,why shopping,its not xmas!

thanks:komal,siras,ashley,exguisitetantra flower :)

Unknown said...

beautiful beautiful poem

and once again every body gets interviewed but me... :( !!!

lol

Daanish said...

I protest and decline my interview,until Abdul Sami gets his interview........OK :)