Monday, March 16, 2009

"caught by a surprise"

We were not lovers,but we were full of love.
No commitments.
No strings.
No attachments.

It was just pure attraction as they say.
No ifs and buts.

We were just friends with benefits.
We kept our benefits of doubts.........
Until we were caught by a surprise !!

5 comments:

americanising desi said...

"We were just friends with benefits.
We kept our benefits of doubts.........
Until we were caught by a surprise !!"

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR... this is the most to the point and to the i dunno what piece.
i am keepin it... I mean this is the fact of my life and i would wanna keep it.
as shivering as realities are i love em.
may i?

moi said...

whats the surprise by the ways?

hfm said...

I think the best stage is where you're friends who love each other very much.It's unspoken but so very evident to both of you.Once it's out in the open, and you proclaim your love for each other.You lose the friendship- that's the really sad part.
:(

I'd rather have a good friend than a crappy lover.

Sophie said...

Well well well...this poem has quite an intriguing end...."Until we were caught by a surprise"...is it to be continued????

Daanish said...

americanising desi,yes you can,its your realities....as you wrote!

moi,let your immagination guess!

hfm,good observation with personal touch!

Sophie,"until we were caught by a surprise".........to be continued:)