Friday, March 20, 2009

"journey of a lifetime"

Some species die once in a lifetime.
I die a little bit every day of my lifetime.
Some species bleed to death once in a lifetime.
I bleed a little bit every day of my lifetime.
Some species love someone once in a lifetime.
I love you a little bit more every day of my lifetime.

You see,
I die a little bit more every day.
I bleed a little bit more every day.
I love you a little bit more every day
My everyday life is some species once in a lifetime.

"No wonder,they don't understand me".
"They are not yet there in their journey of a lifetime".

12 comments:

moi said...

hey this is beautiful, i wonder how you get such words and ideas, there must be lot of feelings and anxiety that you write this!! Its a journey of lifetime after all

americanising desi said...

this is super wow!
i think all our journeys have something in common!

Zeeshan Sattar said...

Superb Man,,,,,

tantra flower said...

If every person feels this is true about his or herself, what does that mean? This was the first thought that I had, I have not explored any further than that, but I will. That is what I love about your poetry...you make me think. Have a good weekend my friend. Namaste

Daanish said...

moi,surely a lot of inspiration comes from my muse,I don't struggle with ideas,words or presentation.I let it flow as such.
No anxiety or writer's itch !

Daanish said...

americanising desi,super thank you.
Actually our journeys have nothing in common,thats why so many travel logs of similar journeys....at least I am in this journey for the first time.

Daanish said...

Zeeshan,
thank you man :)

ps:how to check your blog,I could not surf your blog ?

Daanish said...

tantra flower,thank you for your kind appreciation.

Peace.

Zeeshan Sattar said...

When you will open my Blogger profile you will find a like on the left side as MY WEB PAGE.

I blog here:

http://zsattar.wordpress.com

NAMELESS FAMELESS said...

nice. very nice

Mubi said...

hmmm quite interesting...

'my everyday life is some species once in a lifetime'

Daanish said...

Nameless Fameless,thanks !

Mubi,thanks !