Friday, March 20, 2009

"journey of a lifetime"

Some species die once in a lifetime.
I die a little bit every day of my lifetime.
Some species bleed to death once in a lifetime.
I bleed a little bit every day of my lifetime.
Some species love someone once in a lifetime.
I love you a little bit more every day of my lifetime.

You see,
I die a little bit more every day.
I bleed a little bit more every day.
I love you a little bit more every day
My everyday life is some species once in a lifetime.

"No wonder,they don't understand me".
"They are not yet there in their journey of a lifetime".

12 comments:

moi said...

hey this is beautiful, i wonder how you get such words and ideas, there must be lot of feelings and anxiety that you write this!! Its a journey of lifetime after all

Anonymous said...

this is super wow!
i think all our journeys have something in common!

Z Sattar said...

Superb Man,,,,,

Tantra Flower said...

If every person feels this is true about his or herself, what does that mean? This was the first thought that I had, I have not explored any further than that, but I will. That is what I love about your poetry...you make me think. Have a good weekend my friend. Namaste

Daanish said...

moi,surely a lot of inspiration comes from my muse,I don't struggle with ideas,words or presentation.I let it flow as such.
No anxiety or writer's itch !

Daanish said...

americanising desi,super thank you.
Actually our journeys have nothing in common,thats why so many travel logs of similar journeys....at least I am in this journey for the first time.

Daanish said...

Zeeshan,
thank you man :)

ps:how to check your blog,I could not surf your blog ?

Daanish said...

tantra flower,thank you for your kind appreciation.

Peace.

Z Sattar said...

When you will open my Blogger profile you will find a like on the left side as MY WEB PAGE.

I blog here:

http://zsattar.wordpress.com

Nameless Fameless said...

nice. very nice

Anonymous said...

hmmm quite interesting...

'my everyday life is some species once in a lifetime'

Daanish said...

Nameless Fameless,thanks !

Mubi,thanks !