Tuesday, March 17, 2009

" I know red color very well"

"I know red color very well",I said.
"Red is the color of rose".
"Red is the color of blood".
"Red is the color of love".

And the story goes on like this:

Red was the color of roses,
which she got on her valentine.

Red was the color of a car,
which she got on her birthday.

Red was the color of my lips,
which I got from her lips.

Red was the color of her dress,
which she got on her big day.

Red was the color of my tears,
which I got from her walking away.

"I know red color very well",I said.

11 comments:

moi said...

its beautiful, I know red color very well!! is it a personal experience?

Anupama K. Mazumder said...

Good potrayal of pain... we have known red in various forms at different stages of life.

Mubi said...

aww the tears part is :/
btw you have won an award. visit me :D

Zeeshan Sattar said...

aww beautiful as ever...

Yawar said...

Red also signals danger...

M. Umer Toor said...

...that its my favorite colour...

Anirudh induchudan said...

red is the colour of passion...
pain and love captured beautifully in the poem

Ash said...

red was the color of sky
which cried with me!

tantra flower said...

Red is very intense! Thank you for stopping by, Daanish. It is always a pleasure to connect. Peace.:)

Daanish said...

moi,as a writer yourself,you know the answer.

Anupama,you got it right.

Mubi,awww tears part......?
I did visit and thank you.

Zeeshan,thank you.

Yawar,red for danger,traffic signal too!

Umer,good to know !

Daanish said...

Anirudh,passion and pain true, thanks for your encouragement.

Ash,wow....poetic !

tantra flower,surely very intense!
thanks for your comment.