Saturday, January 3, 2009

"Fantastic Two"

Looking outside the window,
I saw them always together;
Eating,Sitting in woods,
Going away,Coming back,Flying,

Their love appeared to be for all seasons!

I am wondering:
Why our love is so different?
Why can't we be like two free birds!
Why can't we "be a reason to a season for each other's lifetime"


Destitute Rebel said...

Thanks for stopping by Lahore Daily, this is the first time I'm visiting your blog and I must say I see some great poetry hope to keep coming back for more.

Anonymous said...

Aww, this sounds so sad.

Daanish said...

D.R. thanks,see you soon.

hfm:sad,very sad :(

Afaque said...

oh quite sad...
but must not leave hope... the phases come and go :)

Daanish said...

Afaque,thanks for encouragment. This is New Year 1430/2009 year of falling in love:)

Anonymous said...

Brilliant poem! :-)