Monday, January 19, 2009

"The perfect moment"

I said, "I will NEVER leave you"
She said,"I don't BELIEVE you"
I said,"I can swear on my lips over yours"
Then I did swear !
She said,"I do BELIEVE you"
That was the PERFECT moment !!

7 comments:

Abdul Sami said...

perfecto !

Ash said...

The more i am visiting your blog , the more i am finding my self empty with hands
You (MashaAllah) sketch every thing so well in few effortless words that i found my self with nothing left to comment on
I don't know either to feel jealous of you that (MashaAllah… MashaAllah) you write so well or to improve my diction :$

Calm Cool said...

i agree with Ash.
hmmm yar kabhi kabhar banda choka hi mar leta hy, hamesha sixer marna zaroori hy kya :P

Daanish said...

Jo baat dil se nikalti hai dil tak jaati hai... thank you all for nice comments and encouragement:)

Umeri toor said...

the way they believed,,, they, they the fairy tales in the end of shriek 1... "God blesses everyone"
or perhaps not.

Onthewingsofadream said...

beautiful ..that unsaid language of love..:-)

Onthewingsofadream said...

beautiful ..that unsaid language of love..:-)