Thursday, January 22, 2009

"Paralysis by Analysis"

I told her,"I was in love before"
She told me,"she was in love before"

"This is my second love,I miss my first love"
We told,trying to be honest.

I thought,"I will never be like her first love"
She thought"she will never be like my first love"

AND

We lost what was about to happen !!
We lost the chance of 'being in love again' !!
We lost the majestic 'in love again' by the spell of the first loss.
We lost the chance of 'in love again' by:"paralysis by analysis"

11 comments:

hfm said...

I'd love to know who your muse is for these lines of poetry.

Ali said...

First time @ your blog and can relate to this post...

Its a catch with 2nd time love.. you are more sharing and you might risk your new relationship.. you dont share at all and you feel guilty.. Dont know what to do!..

VJ Sophie said...

Liked the title..!!

Abdul Sami said...

the best way to focus on the moment is to loose focus!

seher's shenanigans said...

i hate it when people try to be so stupidly honest...
yes there is first love but that doesnt mean there cannot be another love... a love achieved. committed to??

Calm Cool said...

i agree with sami!
and choo thanks for the tag :) i'll do it at my earliest.

YouTee said...

agree with Seher ..

I think Love is not what you lose Love is what where you start sharing ...


--YouTee

exquisite said...

wonderful

Som said...

Hmmm ... I feel if it is meant to happen it will, yes we tend to be in hangover of the past but Love is not Calculus and we shouldn't over analyze.

I liked the title tough ... :)

Daanish said...

hfm,a muse-poet falls in love, absolutely, and his true love is for him the embodiment of the Muse....

Ali,welcome,glad you can relate.

VJ Sophie,yes title is self explainatory !

Abdul Sami,in real life we don't live in moments,We live in Past,Present and Future.Sometimes its hard to focus,though let loose.

Seher,no grades of honesty but certainly we are addicted to the power of the wound !!

Calm cool,you welcome,in real life we don't live in moments,We live in Past,Present and Future. Sometimes its hard to focus,though let loose.

You Tee,sometimes you know love after you loose.

exquisite,wonderful !

Som,thanks for comments,agree!

exquisite said...

heheh... :)
ur 'analysis' is so better, my input would just prove to be useless/insignificant...

by the way, your writing is astounding...
would love to know ur inspiration behind it :)