Wednesday, January 7, 2009

"Big nose,Too pretty"

Things were not the same between you and me anymore !
Things were changing.

Things were not working out.

You were acting different.
I was acting different.

Love was out of the air!

You were looking for a reason.
I was looking for a reason.

We were mature.We were adults
No fights.No arguments.

You said:I can't,you have a big nose!
I said:I can't,you are too pretty !


jingoist said...

heh does that pour out of your heart or what ??

Abdul Sami said...

heavy man :D !!!

Anonymous said...

arrghhhh why do mean have an inferiority complex...
not good! simply not good :(
i mean the mood of this... post is wonderful!

Asma said...

Decent ending ;)

Anonymous said...


Calm Cool said...

Urs poetic style is really good. each and every piece have a depth, feelings, impact and effects.
I just can't decide which piece stand first.
Good Job!

A very Happy New Year from my side :)

Calm Cool said...

ummm 'good job' are little words for ur literary abilities, "Hats Off" to U!

Mubi said...

love was out of the air.. :p good

i liked it..

Daanish said...

Calm Cool,thanks for encouragement.
Hats off to you!

Mubi:thanks for liking!

Onthewingsofadream said...

nice poem ...:-)

keep writing

Onthewingsofadream said...

btw .. i have a long nose ..and that doesn't make my ex too handsome ..:-P

Afaque said...

Yeah me too... lol
nice poem though...

VJ Sophie said...

Nice one!
Thanx for popping by on ma blog!