So,
Things were not the same between you and me anymore !
Things were changing.
Things were not working out.
You were acting different.
I was acting different.
Love was out of the air!
You were looking for a reason.
I was looking for a reason.
We were mature.We were adults
No fights.No arguments.
You said:I can't,you have a big nose!
I said:I can't,you are too pretty !
13 comments:
heh does that pour out of your heart or what ??
heavy man :D !!!
arrghhhh why do mean have an inferiority complex...
not good! simply not good :(
i mean the mood of this... post is wonderful!
Decent ending ;)
harsh
:O
Urs poetic style is really good. each and every piece have a depth, feelings, impact and effects.
I just can't decide which piece stand first.
Good Job!
A very Happy New Year from my side :)
ummm 'good job' are little words for ur literary abilities, "Hats Off" to U!
love was out of the air.. :p good
i liked it..
Calm Cool,thanks for encouragement.
Hats off to you!
Mubi:thanks for liking!
nice poem ...:-)
keep writing
btw .. i have a long nose ..and that doesn't make my ex too handsome ..:-P
Yeah me too... lol
nice poem though...
Nice one!
Thanx for popping by on ma blog!
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